Sorry can i ask you if my english is right?

what do you do right now? i'm so bored...the furnishing shop is full of slacker people who think to visit an art show room, but he dont want to buy ANYTHING! what NERVES! i miss you my starlight! i wanna BE your snuggle! see you at 8o'clock! kiss! p,s. what we doing this evening? do you remember that we have to sleep at my home?"